Площадка для игр Жужи/Plac zabaw Żuzi/ Zsuzsin leikkikenttä/ Zsuzsis lekplats/ El patio de Zsuzsi/ Ihrisko Zsuzsi
Friday, 30 January 2015
Thursday, 18 September 2014
Jak nie kochać jesieni... [PL: How can one not love autumn]
Liści niesionych wiatrem, w rytm deszczu tańczących.
Ptaków, co przed podróżą na drzewach usiadły,
Czekając na swych braci, za morze lecących.¨
Szarych, żółtych, czerwonych, srebrnych, szczerozłotych.
Gdy białą mgłą otuli zachodzący księżyc,
Kojąc w twym słabym sercu, codzienne zgryzoty.
Pełnej tęsknoty za tym, co już nie powróci.
Chryzantemy pobieli, dla tych, których nie ma.
Szronem łąki maluje, ukoi, zasmuci.
Tego, co królowanie blaskiem świec rozpocznie.
I w swoim majestacie uczy nas pokory.
Bez słowa na cmentarze wzywa nas corocznie.
Saturday, 30 August 2014
Tidig gryning [SWE: Early Dawn]
Below you will find two of her poems in Swedish - Tidig gryning and Vierge moderne - as well as my translations of them. The first poem I find soothing, there is something hopeful about it. The other one, I believe, is a good description of womanhood and the contradictory aspects and the complex whole of the self.
Tidig gryning
Några sista stjärnor lysa matt.
Jag ser dem ur mitt fönster. Himlen är blek,
man anar knappast dagen som börjar i fjärran.
Det vilar en tystnad utbredd över sjön,
det ligger en viskning på lur mellan träden,
min gamla trädgård lyssnar halvförstrött
till nattens andetag, som susa över vägen.
*******
A few final stars shine dimly.
I see them from my window. The sky is pale,
one barely senses the day that begins in the distance.
A silence is resting over the lake,
a whisper is hiding between the trees,
my old garden is listening half-distractedly
to the breaths of the night, rustling over the road
Vierge moderne
Jag är ingen kvinna. Jag är ett neutrum.
Jag är ett barn, en page och ett djärvt beslut,
jag är en skrattande strimma av en scharlakanssol...
Jag är ett nät för alla glupska fiskar,
jag är en skål för alla kvinnors ära,
jag är ett steg mot slumpen och fördärvet,
jag är ett språng i friheten och självet...
Jag är blodets viskning i mannens öra,
jag är en själens frossa, köttets längtan och förvägran,
jag är en ingångsskylt till nya paradis.
Jag är en flamma, sökande och käck,
jag är ett vatten, djupt men dristigt upp till knäna,
jag är eld och vatten i ärligt sammanhang på fria villkor...
********
I am no woman. I am a neuter.
I am a child, a page and a bold decision,
I am a laughing ray of a scarlet sun...
I am a net for all gluttonous fishes,
I am a bowl for the honour of all women,
I am a step toward chance and ruin,
I am a leap into freedom and the self...
I am the whisper of the blood in a man's ear,
I am the shivers of the soul, the longing and the denial of the flesh,
I am an entrance sign to new paradises.
I am a flame, seeking and jaunty,
I am a water, deep but daring to your knees,
I am fire and water in an honest context on free terms...
Saturday, 2 August 2014
Chciałbym opisać [PL: I would like to describe]
Yet again it is time for a translated poem. This poem - Chciałbym opisać - was written by the Polish poet Zbigniew Herbert. In case you are interested to read more Polish poetry, you may find it here http://poema.pl/publikacja/2715-chcialbym-opisac
The translation is mine.
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Chciałbym opisać najprostsze wzruszenie radość lub smutek ale nie tak jak robią to inni sięgając po promienie deszczu albo słońca chciałbym opisać światło które we mnie się rodzi ale wiem że nie jest ono podobne do żadnej gwiazdy bo jest nie tak jasne nie tak czyste i niepewne chciałbym opisać męstwo nie ciągnąc za sobą zakurzonego lwa a także niepokój nie potrząsając szklanką pełną wody inaczej mówiąc oddam wszystkie przenośnie za jeden wyraz wyłuskany z piersi jak żebro za jedno słowo które mieści się w granicach mojej skóry ale nie jest to widać możliwe i aby powiedzieć - kocham biegam jak szalony zrywając naręcza ptaków i tkliwość moja która nie jest przecież w wody prosi wodę o twarz i gniew różny od ognia pożycza od niego wielomównego języka tak się miesza tak się miesza we mnie to co siwi panowie podzielili raz na zawsze i powiedzieli to jest podmiot a to przedmiot zasypiamy z jedną ręką pod głową a z drugą w kopcu planet a stopy opuszczają nas i smakują ziemię małymi korzonkami które rano odrywamy boleśnie
Zbigniew Herbert
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I would like to describe the simplest emotion happiness or sadness but not the way others do it reaching for the rays of rains or sunshine
I would like to describe the light that grows within me but I know that it is not similar to any star because it is not so bright not so clean not so pure and uncertain
I would like to describe the bravery not dragging behind me the dusty lion nor anxiety not shaking the glass filled with water
in other words I will give up all metaphors for one sentence taken from the breast like a rib for one word which fits within the limits of my skin but which cannot be seen
and to say – I love I run like crazy breaking the flock of birds and my tenderness not yet being in the water asks for water on her face
and the anger different from fire borrows from it the verbose language
so it is mixed so it is mixed within me that what grey gentlemen divided once and for all and said that is an entity and that an object
we fall asleep with one hand under our head and the other in a pile of planets
and our feet leave us and they have a taste of earth with small roots which we painfully tear up when the morning comes
Thursday, 24 July 2014
czy świat umrze trochę [PL: if the world dies a little]
kiedy ja umrę
patrzę patrzę
ubrany w lisi kołnierz
idzie świat
nigdy nie myślałam
że jestem włosem w jego futrze
zawsze byłam tu
on - tam
a jednak
miło jest pomyśleć
że świat umrze trochę
kiedy ja umrę
Halina Poświatowska
****
If the world dies a little
when I die
I look, I look
dressed in a fox collar
the world goes on
I never thought
that I am a hair in its fur
I have always been here
It - there
Yet
it is nice to think
that the world dies a little
when I die
*************
Om världen dör lite
när jag dör
Jag tittar, jag titar
klädd i en rävkrage
går världen
Jag tänkte aldrig
att jag är ett av håren i dess päls
Jag har alltid varit här
Den - där
Ändå
är det trevligt att tänka
att världen dör lite
när jag dör
** Translations to English and Swedish, my own***
Wednesday, 23 July 2014
świat jest pusty [PL: the world is empty]
świat jest pusty odkąd poszedłeś nie można żyć bez materii uśmiechu świat umarł na pożar lamp blady księżyc ponad twoimi ustami dogorywa świat jest zły odkąd poszedłeś szczerzy zęby i futro wilcze napina to co było ciepłem zwiniętym w kłębek nie jest świat - kosmicznie zgubiony w sobie z zimna drży
Tuesday, 22 July 2014
bądź przy mnie blisko [PL: be close to me]
bo tylko wtedy
nie jest mi zimno
chłód wieje z przestrzeni
kiedy myślę
jaka ona duża
i jaka ja
to mi trzeba
twoich dwóch ramion zamkniętych
dwóch promieni wszechświata
Halina Poświatowska
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be close to me
because only then
I will not feel cold
the cold blows from space
when I think
how great it is
and what I am like
I need them
your two closed arms
two rays of universe
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var nära mig
för endast då
har jag inte kallt
kylan blåser in från luften
när jag tänker på
hur stor den är
och hur jag är
jag behöver detta
dina två stänga armar
två av universums strålar
* translations to English and Swedish - my own
Sunday, 1 June 2014
Básnik sa modlí za deti
I have translated the poem into English and Swedish. Both translations are below. At the end of this post, you will find a youtube video of another text by Milan Rufús. Listen to it, and you will hear what a wonderful language Slovak is.
Básnik sa modlí za deti
Monday, 19 May 2014
Pravda [SK: Truth]
Doing It Right? Notes on Translation.
When it comes to translation, a lot of things can go wrong. If I hobby-translate some poem, my errors will (hopefully) not have a negative impact on anyone. I do not ask anyone to pay for my translation services or any other services that require translations to be correct. In other word, this criticism is not aimed at language-learning individuals. I question the behavior of companies that do not take these things seriously. However, in the role of customer I feel that I have the right to expect the service provider to provide me with correct information and correct translations. This past weekend I went to Estonia with an Estonian ferry company that provided all information in four languages: Estonian, Swedish, Russian and English. That is great, isn't it? But - and of course there is a but - why pay for a translator if nobody proofreads the text? My opinions continue after the examples. I have done a word-by-word translation of the Swedish texts.
| Here we have a ball pit, slide, toys, pain tools the toilet and nursery for the children. During school holidays there is a play leader for children. NB! Parents are responsible for their children. |
| The latest dance hits choose the DJ. Modern sound technology and impressing Light suits all who value the trendiest beats. |
These examples are harmless. Nobody will get hurt if it is the hits that choose the DJ rather than the opposite. But, how can I trust that information concerning more important things (what to do when the boat starts sinking) is correct? Can I be 100% that the staff will understand what I say if there is no intention to use the language correctly? (Here I would like to mention that staff with name tags indicating that they know Swedish rather spoke English). It would be fine with me that Swedish wouldn't be used at all - but if you are going to use it, do it properly! Am I a happy customer? Not really.
Sunday, 13 April 2014
Language Mishaps
Unfortunately - and due to the human factor, I believe - things can sometimes go awfully wrong.
The Finnish version of the text tells us that the product was made in Lithuania (Liettuassa), whereas the Swedish translation claims that it is Latvia (Lettland) where the bread was baked.
Maybe I have too little to do at the moment, but I did write an e-mail to customer care asking for more details. I would very much like to know where my bread was baked, but even more I'd like the information to be correct.
Sunday, 5 January 2014
Ночь, улица, фонарь, аптека, Бессмысленный и тусклый свет.
Look what I found on Wikipedia: one of my favourite poems by Aleksandr Blok!
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Night, street, lantern, drugstore.
Meaningless and dull light.
Live another quarter of a century -
Everything will be the same. There is no way out.
You will die – then start again from the beginning.
And everything will be repeated like before:
Night, the channel’s icy ripples,
Drugstore, street, lantern.
****
Saturday, 12 October 2013
Gondolatok a könyvtárban [HU: Reflections In The Library]
There has been very little translation and very little Hungarian in this blog recently. But, when stumbling into a poem about a library, I just had to give a go at it.
Gondolatok a könyvtárban was written by Hungarian poet Mihály Vörösmarty. It’s a long poem and can be found in its entirety here. Here’s the translation for the first lines.
Hová lépsz most, gondold meg, oh tudós,
Az emberiségnek elhányt rongyain
Komor betűkkel, mint a téli éj,
Leírva áll a rettentő tanulság:
"Hogy míg nyomorra milliók születnek,
Néhány ezernek jutna üdv a földön,
Ha istenésszel, angyal érzelemmel
Használni tudnák éltök napjait."
Where are you heading now, think, oh scientist,
To humankind they throw rags
In gloomy letters, like a winter night,
Written down the scary lesson stands:
“While millions are born into poverty,
A few thousand could be welcomed to the world,
If they knew how to apply God’s wisdom, the angel’s emotion
to their lived days.”
Sunday, 5 May 2013
Láska (Sk: Love)
It’s been a while since I translated Slovak poetry. Today I finally found some spare time for this highly satisfying endeavour. Playing with languages is fun.
The poet who wrote this poem is called Ondrej Nagaj and he has been active for quite a few decades. The original Slovak version is below the translation.
Love cannot be encountered
everyday.
For the lucky ones -
like a bright star it appears
once, twice in a lifetime,
others will not touch upon it.
It entered my atmosphere
like a meteorite,
like a comet,
when I was living tiredly
the evening twilight flew
into my soul.
From your brightness
a pair of yellow rays
touched me with their
warm shiver
and became for me
the golden key.
For that I so happily
live on Earth.
Original version by Ondrej Nagaj:
Každý deň sa láska
stretnúť nedá.
Pre šťastných raz
-- dvakrát v živote
objaví sa
ako jasná hviezda,
iný sa jej ani nedotkne.
Vstúpila si
v moju atmosféru
ako bolid,
ako kométa,
keď na dušu
žitím unavenú
mi večerný súmrak
prilietal.
Z tvojho jasu
zopár žltých lúčov
dotklo sa ma
teplým zachvením
a stalo sa
pre mňa zlatým kľúčom.
Preto tak rád
žijem na Zemi.
- Aj kalina je kvet, 2000
Sunday, 16 December 2012
The Good Man
Dobrý človek
Celú noc nespal. Pre bolesť. Nie však v srdci.V ňom vždycky horel plameň nehynúci,
pahreba lásky, čistý ľudský zrak.
Za také dary letíš hoci nad oblak,
za také dary tvoje srdce rastie
a rozhadzuje svetom najprostejšie šťastie,
láskavý tlkot, najvrúcejší cit,
ten, ktorý nevie ani napalm spopolniť.
Celú noc nespí. Na všetkých myslí ľudí,
ktorých už bolesť nikdy neprebudí,
budú rásť pod slnkom, čo nikdy nehasne,
a šepoce si: To bude úžasné...
- Vladimír Reisel, Milovaní milujúci, 1954
The Good Man
He didn’t sleep all night. Because of pain. But not in the heart.In it the never-ending flame was always burning,
the ember of love, the pure human vision.
For such gifts one flies above the clouds,
for such gifts one’s heart will glow
and scatter the world with the simplest happiness,
the gentle beat, the most ardent feeling,
the one that not even napalm can cremate.
All night he doesn’t sleep. He thinks of all those people,
whom pain has never awaken,
who will grow under the sun, that will never go out,
and he whispers to himself: it will be wonderful…
- Vladimír Reisel, Milovaní milujúci, 1954
Saturday, 15 December 2012
Byť (SK: To Be)
Byť
Byť ako strom, a nie ako trstina,
čo sa už pod vánkom zohýna.
Žiť ako strom, z ktorého robia
stožiare i hračky.
Žiť ako strom a umrieť postojačky.
To človek vydá, čo je v ňom.
Teda aj padnúť ako strom.
A potom, keď už zotlie celý,
byť práchnom, ktoré krotí včely
a núti ich tvoriť nie jed,
ale predovšetkým med.
Milan Ferko - z rukopisu, 1999
To be
To be like tree, and not like a reed,
which already bends under the breeze.
To live like a tree, of which
masts and toys are made.
To live like a tree and die while standing.
Man gives away what's inside him.
So he falls like a tree, too.
And then, when it's all rotten,
to be tinder, that tames the bees
and forces them to make not poison,
but above all honey.
Milan Ferko – from manuscripts, 1999 [translastion my own]
Sunday, 18 November 2012
First Attempt
* * *Po kvapke tvojej lásky som dnes túžil,
ja, vetrom rozochvený list.
Možno mi slnko namaľuje na krík zopár ruží,
za tebou musím na kraj sveta ísť.
Na ceste sa mi biela šálka rozlomila,
z dňa zostal už len zlatý pás.
Noc, moja dobrá modrá víla,
nezahas svetlo, čo je v nás!
Potom ťa pojmem tíško za ruku,
ty si tá rosa krištáľová,
čo padá za skorého rána na lúku.
Na pásik tejto hnedej zeme
my budeme sa vracať stále znova,
kým spolu koniec leta nenájdeme.
Dezider Banga - Horiaca višňa, 1983
For the drops of your affection I longed today,
I, the leaf shaken by the wind.
Maybe the sun paints me on the bush of a few roses,
for you I must go to the end of the world.
On the road I was broken by a white cup,
only a golden strip remained of the day.
The night, my blue fairy godmother,
unveil the light that is in you!
Then I will take you quietly by the hand,
you are the crystal dew,
that falls from early morning onto the meadow.
To the strip of this brown earth,
we will return together, over and over again,
until we find the end of summer.
- Dezider Banga - Horiaca višňa, 1983 -
(Translation my own)
Saturday, 27 October 2012
Oh, Spring!
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Oh, spring – endless and limitless -
endless and limitless is the dream!
Life, I recognise you! I accept you!
And welcome you with the sound of a shield.
Misfortune, I accept you,
And luck, I greet you!
There's no shame in the enchanting land
of crying, nor in the mystery of laughter.
Sleepless disputes, I accept you,
The morning lingers in the dark window curtains,
So the spring appears annoyed, drunken
To my bloodshot eyes.
I accept the deserted villages!
And the wells of man-made cities!
The bleached vastness of the skies,
And the longing of the working labour!
I meet you at the threshold,
With the wild wind in your serpentine locks,
And the enigmatic name of God,
On your frozen, pressed lips.
Before this hostile meeting
I never throw away the shield ...
And you never turn your back...
But above us – there's the intoxicating dream!
And I look, and measure the hostility,
while hating, cursing and loving:
The torment, the death - yet I know -
That all the same: I accept you!
[translation: my own]
Original poem by Alexander Blok
О, весна без конца и без краю -
Без конца и без краю мечта!
Узнаю тебя, жизнь! Принимаю!
И приветствую звоном щита!
Принимаю тебя, неудача,
И удача, тебе мой привет!
В заколдованной области плача,
В тайне смеха - позорного нет!
Принимаю бессонные споры,
Утро в завесах темных окна,
Чтоб мои воспаленные взоры
Раздражала, пьянила весна!
Принимаю пустынные веси!
И колодцы земных городов!
Осветленный простор поднебесий
И томления рабьих трудов!
И встречаю тебя у порога -
С буйным ветром в змеиных кудрях,
С неразгаданным именем бога
На холодных и сжатых губах...
Перед этой враждующей встречей
Никогда я не брошу щита...
Никогда не откроешь ты плечи...
Но над нами - хмельная мечта!
И смотрю, и вражду измеряю,
Ненавидя, кляня и любя:
За мученья, за гибель - я знаю -
Все равно: принимаю тебя!
Saturday, 30 June 2012
На ногах не стоит человек.
Below you can find the first lines from Alexander Blok’s poem двенадцать (The Twelve). The translation is my own.
Черный вечер.
Белый снег.
Ветер, ветер!
На ногах не стоит человек.
Ветер, ветер -
На всем божьем свете!
Завивает ветер
Белый снежок.
Под снежком - ледок.
Скользко, тяжко,
Всякий ходок
Скользит - ах, бедняжка!
Black evening.
White snow.
Wind, wind!
The man cannot stand on his feet.
Wind, wind!
On all of God’s earth!
The wind is twisting
The white snow.
Under the snow, there is a crust of ice.
Slippery, hard,
Every walker slips – oh, you poor thing!
Friday, 25 May 2012
Среди миров/Among the Worlds
Одной Звезды я повторяю имя...
Не потому, чтоб я Её любил,
А потому, что я томлюсь с другими.
И если мне сомненье тяжело,
Я у Неё одной ищу ответа,
Не потому, что от Неё светло,
А потому, что с Ней не надо света.
(Иннокентий Фёдорович Анненский)
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Own (free) translation
Among the worlds, in the hazy glimmer
I repeat the name of one single star...
Not because I love her so intensly,
but because I'm tortured by the others.
And if the doubs exhaust me,
I seek the answer only from her,
Not because she's shining so brightly,
but because with her I need no light.
(Innokenty Annensky)


